Whisper Want

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Whisper Want

June 18, 2003, 2:09 pm

Gossamer barrieron the periphery of sightwhere most cant seea shimmer mist on air trickery of spectral lightthats where you will find methe whisper wantsigh of desire tucked awaythe little part of...

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June 18, 2003, 2:47 pm

I could really feel the longing in this; it reaches so deep. Loved your clever metaphor: "pennies in the bank building . . . compounding need" Sharp and poignant work.Patricia...

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Re: Whisper Want

June 18, 2003, 4:16 pm

PatriciaThank you. All of us have felt this one time at leastRougestrega

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Re: Whisper Want

June 18, 2003, 6:19 pm

Rouge honey...you do have a blue-sy singer in your soul...

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Re: Whisper Want

June 18, 2003, 6:25 pm

Galabeginning to find that outRouge

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Mmmmthe title drew me inand then the poemspit me out gaspingfor more His house is the stars. Behold, I take up my place in its nomes.-From The Book of The Dead, Begin the Chapters of Sekhet-HetepetBe...

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Re: Whisper Want

June 18, 2003, 11:47 pm

PixieIsn't that what a poem is supposed to do?Rouge

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Re: Whisper Want

June 19, 2003, 1:24 pm

Quote:Gossamer barrieron the periphery of sightwhere most cant seea shimmer mist on air Hi R, From these opening verses on...a shimmering gem from your pen! *Frodo*

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Re: Whisper Want

June 19, 2003, 2:27 pm

FrodoI hope what I write continues to sparkleRougestrega

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Re: Whisper Want

July 7, 2003, 2:37 pm

I missed this gem the first time around....excellent!!!!!Quote:Gossamer barrieron the periphery of sightwhere most cant seea shimmer mist on air nessi"We write to taste life twice, in the moment and...

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